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  1. Unni Babu says:

    Amazing poem, my most fav line is “friends appear and disappear in the moonless tragic sky”!!!

    It was challenging to read bcoz of the tiny font ☹️ and since this poem is in a photo, you should post your poems on instagram too.. great works deserve more audience 💙

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    1. neha98blog says:

      Unni, your appreciation means a lot.
      I have an Instagram account where I post my poetry.
      (nehaspeaks11)

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  2. Josh says:

    Brilliant section of words. I re read it to see what will happen to her now.. so tell me what will happen to her by the passionate grabbing by her love..?

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    1. neha98blog says:

      She is a warrior too, and she will not let it destroy her.
      Thank you Josh for your lovely comment.

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  3. This is out of the world, even that is less. Every bit of the poem touched my heart. I don’t think I am even capable of giving my opinion on this. Eta darun! ❤️

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    1. neha98blog says:

      Bonu, every time I read your comment, my face beams with smile.Always be there.
      Onek bhalobasha aar thank you for being there with me.

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      1. I am always here. I am so sorry, ami onek din WordPress khultei parini. Lots of love💖

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  4. Love the journey most will experience whether to be woe or a pleasant experience. Bittersweet with some. Impressive poem.

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    1. neha98blog says:

      A warm thank you for this wonderful words of admiration. Much appreciated.

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  5. da-AL says:

    Absolutely stunning choice of words as well as how to display it ❤

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  6. alexraphael says:

    “Darkness rushes in, unleashing the fury from the curls of her hair, an old friend seeps into her isolated heart”. Just jumps off the page!

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    1. neha98blog says:

      Alex, sorry for the late reply, I hope you would forgive me.
      Was busy lately.
      Thank you for your constant support, it’s reader’s like you that always inspires me.

      Like

      1. alexraphael says:

        It’s ok, I know how busy life gets. I’m glad you still write. I think my last blog will make you smile.

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