Cages of my heart..

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I can’t write poetry my love!

This is all the wailing of my heart which gushes like water from a chasm

You broke me in one tiny second and the agony startled me

your words made me question myself this is what heartbreak feels like

Darling! I do not know poetry

I do know the roaring sounds made by the cages of heart,

when I heard your footsteps of leaving my deserted heart

I was nothing after that

just a bird  caged  in her own heart

seasons of fallen leaves have blown upon my heart 

So many heartbreaks also followed 

But the first sound of hearing the scattering of something so dear

Always remained in an unknown territory of the same cages 

you once broked….

        

It’s a long time I last wrote.I hope you all are well.Take care you all.

lots of love 

Neha

46 Comments Add yours

  1. Alok Singhal says:

    Seems like coming from deep inside!

    Liked by 3 people

    1. neha98blog says:

      Thanks Alok Dada(In Bengali we call brother as Dada).Fantasy and imagination..that’s all.

      Liked by 1 person

      1. No probz!✌😎

        Liked by 1 person

  2. Aqsa ❀ says:

    This is beautiful Neha ❀ πŸ™‚

    Liked by 3 people

    1. neha98blog says:

      Thanks aqsa.I hope you are well.lots of love to you.

      Liked by 1 person

    2. Aqsa ❀ says:

      My pleasure. I am doing alright, amd you? Much love back πŸ™‚πŸ˜˜

      Liked by 2 people

  3. Mehul Singla says:

    Welcome back to WordPress after a long time. Your post was awesome. Depicts your true feelings.. Awesome workπŸ‘πŸ˜Š

    Liked by 3 people

    1. neha98blog says:

      Thanks mehul for appreciating my writing.

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Mehul Singla says:

        It should be me thanking you for writing this beautiful piece of poem😊😊

        Liked by 2 people

      2. neha98blog says:

        That’s so sweet of you

        Liked by 1 person

  4. idiotchamp says:

    This is just so beautiful πŸ™‚ Really loved it πŸ™‚

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Dheeraj Dave says:

      oho…..beutiful writing nehu….😊

      Liked by 2 people

      1. neha98blog says:

        Thanks dheeraj

        Liked by 1 person

  5. rrr799 says:

    Great expressions!

    Liked by 3 people

  6. Deep feeling are transfered into words. !!

    Liked by 1 person

  7. Neal says:

    Your poetry is a wonder neha, which I cherish to fonder πŸ™‚

    Liked by 2 people

    1. neha98blog says:

      Your comment is poetry in itself.I adore your poetry

      Like

      1. Neal says:

        Thanks Neha. Hoping you are enjoying your trip πŸ™‚

        Like

    1. neha98blog says:

      Thanks di for loving it.

      Liked by 1 person

    1. neha98blog says:

      Thank you!!How are you?I hope you are well.lots of love to you.

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Hi, dear Neha! I am good but really busy with school , and my children . How are you dear ? whatΒ΄s a of love to you.

        Liked by 1 person

      2. neha98blog says:

        So good to hear from you.I am good and hope to see some new posts from you soon.
        Lots of love
        Neha

        Liked by 1 person

  8. Ranjini says:

    The first shattering sound! That is something right? Such a beautiful poem and I loved that particular area πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

    1. neha98blog says:

      Thanks Rajni for encouraging me..truly appreciate that.

      Liked by 1 person

  9. Beautiful!! Glad to see you back. Hope all is well.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. neha98blog says:

      Yes good to hear from you.I hope you are good.Thanks for your beautiful comment.

      Like

  10. Martian says:

    That’s so nice expression of heart break.. hope you are better now dear

    Liked by 1 person

      1. Martian says:

        welcome xoxo

        Liked by 1 person

  11. utkarsh7668 says:

    Doing intense poetry new talent

    Liked by 1 person

      1. utkarsh7668 says:

        Talent on a different level shayaar…..

        Liked by 1 person

      2. neha98blog says:

        Seriously thank you so much

        Liked by 1 person

      3. utkarsh7668 says:

        Its going on a good way go for it

        Like

      4. utkarsh7668 says:

        πŸ™ŒπŸ™ŒπŸ™ŒπŸ™ŒπŸ™Œ

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