The world knew her as calm
But inside her cells
There is she laying,A glimpse of madness
Her eyes are like the branches of spring flowers,waiting to grow
Beneath her eyelids,A million words are resting
In the srands of her hairlocks,there are strength lies
Her silent face never lets you know
the galaxies in her feet,and the heaven in her eyes
Beautiful is a lousy and loosy way to describe her
Who is she?
She is every woman who dared to dream,to fly high
She is woman who is within us
Be brave enough to wake her
We all are diamonds
But few women can go through the process of it
and those who goes
They see her within the veins of body
Mingling through souls
This women are one of a kind.
Beauty…..keep writing ๐
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Thanks rohit.
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Love It!๐๐๐
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Amazing….:)
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Lovely…
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Thanks so much
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Your post is so beautiful. I nominated you for the Real Neat Blog Award
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Thank you love!!I am so honoered,can you tell me how can i enter in this,
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Powerful descriptors, very relatable and a gem to read ๐
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I am so glad you red my post,Thanks for being so humble.can’t wait totalk to u more(I just love to talk with people)
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good one ๐
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Thanks so much!
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My pleasure ๐
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A fine tribute to womanhood…….You said it write…..it is not easy to be a woman….like diamonds, we sparkle, but the journey towards becoming one is a tough one….Check out the blogging contest at http://funkaar.in/contest.html and do participate……
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Thanks sunaina for such a beautiful remark!I trully appreciate it
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Love it โค
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Thank you so much..I am so happy you visited my blog
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I’m a big fan of ur writing now
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I am just so happy to read that..you are so good di.Bless you
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U r better than me darling
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absouletly not di..You are so kind,so lovely and world needs more people like you.You make the a beautiful place and your smile is a touch of a sunshine.Take care di.
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Awww…u r really sweet dear…thank u ๐๐
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she has many folds some time she drenched you with love as a lover, while nurture you like mother, protecting and fighting for you as a sister, while holds your hands as a life partner…. she protects and nourish your tree..she is soft, she is rough, she is not only a girl,, Lakshmi she is incarnation of goddess Lakshmi some time Maa Durga…truely you have magic in ur words..to arrest the attention of the reader …keep writing amazing
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I am beyond flattered.Thank you will not do justice.Thanks for supporting me.
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I always support you. keep writing …
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she is you,
you is her,
her is you.
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Thanks so much for appreciating it
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welcome dear…can we write a poem together?
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I am not sure,Actually I try to write poem and I am not so good at it.
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i mean it would be like a duet..can try out..i just wanna try out this kinda of poetry..
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Ok.It is a nice offer,I would be glad to write poems like that.
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ok let’s start then..any theme u like?
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You suggest some theme..There is no theme in my mind right now,I have to think about it.
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ok…we will start with tree?…its like a duet songs…i write a stanza and you write another stanza..then we merge it and post on our blogs…got it?
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ok.
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you can be like a man or tree..which one u wanna be?
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a man
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ok i write a post and you can start replying there..i will be writing a man
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i will be like tree*
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theme is: a man and a tree are talking , and the tree complaints about the global warming and pollution and beg him to stop the pollution…
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ok
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posted
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sorry to disappoint you.I have some work to do,can we do it tomorrow?
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No problem. Yes sure
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I posted
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oh, i thought you gonna work..great…i was writing more..thinking you are not here ๐
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word is word.I can’t leave you dissapointed.
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such a beautiful friend..u read the poem? i wrote more…are you going work now? you can post on your blog too…same poem..
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I am going to sleep now,too tired.
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ok good night sleep wellll
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Thanks and we will work tomorrow.
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sure..sleep
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Good night.
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how we can write poems virtually?Is there a way we can write poems discussing with each other.
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i explained in another reply
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