Rise..

with a journal i started my journey

after you

With the kajal that smuged upon my eyes

with the endless nights where sky was my only companion

i was broken,and though  hundred times i fix my face

but still the teardrops make their way again

with your love,I am on a new journey

to find myself 

I was a calm waterdrop when you meet me

but when you left

The flame inside me turned into a storm

you thought this girl will always be weak,fragile

You once pushed me

now watch me Rise!

Long time,no post.How are you all?Hope you all are well.Take care all of you

47 Comments Add yours

  1. idiotchamp says:

    Hey can you please review my blog as I am new here please

    Liked by 2 people

    1. neha98blog says:

      Sure love,.Thanks for taking your time to read my blog.I appreciate that

      Liked by 1 person

      1. idiotchamp says:

        Well it would be a great help to me and will surely boost me

        Liked by 1 person

  2. apologuetoapprise says:

    It was for ??

    Liked by 2 people

    1. neha98blog says:

      Sorry,I can’t understand what you are saying

      Liked by 1 person

      1. apologuetoapprise says:

        I mean ur blog “rise” specifies what ???

        Liked by 1 person

      2. neha98blog says:

        It specifies the growth,after everything fall apart,The rise is the phoniex of your soul.

        Liked by 1 person

      3. apologuetoapprise says:

        Aaahh.. that was pretty nice.. the thought was damn clear..got confused with d words !!..

        It was good to read !!

        Liked by 2 people

      4. apologuetoapprise says:

        Pleasure was all mine dear !!..😍

        Liked by 1 person

  3. idiotchamp says:

    You have a very good poetic skills neha

    Liked by 2 people

    1. neha98blog says:

      Thanks for your kind words

      Liked by 1 person

      1. idiotchamp says:

        Well pleasure was totally mine

        Liked by 1 person

      2. idiotchamp says:

        Hey review my poems please

        Liked by 1 person

      3. idiotchamp says:

        Thanks again

        Liked by 1 person

      4. neha98blog says:

        Dear,From now i am following you because i want to witness a great writer from the begining.Always will be there for you.

        Liked by 1 person

      5. idiotchamp says:

        Well that’s a great honour for me hopefully I won’t disappoint you

        Liked by 1 person

      6. neha98blog says:

        You won’t i know,Can you give me your opinion on my other posts(Seriously please don’t think me as selfish,i geniunlly love your blog,I just wanna know your thoughts on it,)

        Like

      7. idiotchamp says:

        Obviously I will

        Liked by 1 person

      8. neha98blog says:

        thank you for being so humble

        Liked by 1 person

      9. idiotchamp says:

        Well thank you for your support

        Liked by 1 person

      10. neha98blog says:

        Always there love for you

        Liked by 1 person

    1. neha98blog says:

      Thank you sis…Love ya

      Like

  4. Simply-Me says:

    Loved reading it Neha. πŸ‘πŸΌ

    Liked by 1 person

    1. neha98blog says:

      Thank you for giving me your time and love.

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Simply-Me says:

        Anytime Neha. πŸ‘πŸΌ it’s my pleasure.

        Like

  5. Mehul Singla says:

    Your poems are getting better post by post!!! Good going!!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. neha98blog says:

      Thank you mehul for ur wonderful support

      Liked by 1 person

  6. ladybug165 says:

    I enjoyed your writing ! 😊

    Liked by 1 person

    1. neha98blog says:

      Thank you love and i loved your new post,it was touching

      Like

  7. It was nice, Loved reading it…😊 Keep it upπŸ‘πŸ˜Š

    Liked by 1 person

    1. neha98blog says:

      Thanks so much dear!!

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Pleasure is always mine😊😊

        Liked by 1 person

  8. Long time you didn’t post anything, it was like your long break here… It’s good to see your post 😊😊

    Liked by 1 person

    1. neha98blog says:

      I missed you too and i loved your new post so much love.How are you ?

      Liked by 1 person

      1. I’m good. What about you?
        Missed you too… Where were you?😊😊

        Liked by 1 person

      2. neha98blog says:

        Busy with studies.that’s why.I am good

        Liked by 1 person

      3. And thank you so much for liking my new post… 😊

        Liked by 1 person

      4. neha98blog says:

        Your post is really good

        Liked by 1 person

      5. Thank you once again 😊😊

        Liked by 1 person

  9. Let the rise be begun!! πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

    1. neha98blog says:

      Thank you so much!!Your views means a lot to me

      Like

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